best sad love poems quotesWhat do you think of my poems?

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I just wrote them and put 'em up today. Gimmi feedback and tell me which did you like best =]

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I really liked your poem
Made me feel real glad
I had a bunch of problems
But now I am not sad

Your words made my heart tingle
With glitter and glee
But now I am single
My girlfriend she left me

I went to the apartment
To see my fair mate Bob
He gave me the key
To the Lob (....by?)

My name is Gargonzola
I have a lot of friends
I have an epidermus
It's name is Sven

Just now I am perturbed
By your presencebest sad love poems quotes in this womb
For now I am disturbed
And need to find a room

The room will be quite tasty
With lemons and with limes
I will lick these walls clean
With my tasty tasty rhymes

In conclusion I must say
That you are quite the stud
I hope that I will see your face
In the zoo

Fin.

Simply yours,
Master Caderine (Hedgehog Beat Poet)
Very interesting. I like more the first poem,because the second is a lot unexceptional, but the second is also good . What did you thought before to make these poems ?

The first poem gives a strange sense of agony as you read, it is interesting tbest sad love poems quoteso try to understand the idea that wants to pass. I liked

The second is well placed and it is again a poem arouse feelings, but rather commonplace and not adding anything very new.I like a lot of this part:

Want me to jump into a lake?
Sure, Ill do it right away
Just so you know this love isnt a fake
Id do anything to keep hearing you say:

I love you.
I love the first one,
I sounds like it belongs in some funky jazz song,
Something I'd choreograph a dance to,
love it !:)

answer mine?

haha..
WOW!!ur poems sure romantic..
OMG!!i truly love it sia!!!hahaha!!!